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Who Am I?

December 4, 2011
By Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.


I shall tell you a riddle
about a young girl
who has an interesting story to tell.
Here it is :

I am beautiful,
I am intelligent,
I am attractive.

I have talents,
I have friends,
I have family.

I have my downfalls,
I am not perfect,
I have made mistakes.

I will never know what would have happened,
I will not always make the right decision,
But I will always be me.

Who am I?

I am every girl in the world,
I am every girl who dislikes herself,
I am every girl who thinks she is useless.

I am wrong about those things,
because I am loved
and I am me.


The author's comments:
I'm not the most confident person in th world either. My self-esteem isn't that high.

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Neytiri GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2012 at 11:44 am
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Thanks!! That means a lot!!

Joshua. GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 3:14 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
10 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

Beautiful! I like it a lot! :)

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:04 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Thanks honey!

on Jan. 29 2012 at 11:59 am
Sarah.Ellis2014 BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life can&#039;t ever really defeat a writer who is in love with writing, for life itself is a writer&#039;s lover until death - fascinating, cruel, lavish, warm, cold, treacherous, constant. ~Edna Ferber<br /> <br /> It is impossible to discourage the real writers - they don&#039;t give a damn what you say, they&#039;re going to write. ~Sinclair Lewis

Amazing. There's no better way to even describe it:)