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Exiled
June 26, 2012
You left me alone
Outside in the cold
Drenched in my tears
That will never dry
Walking the streets
In an endless sleep
Searching for somewhere warm to hide
Abandoned by my shadow
Thunder clashes in my head
What’s done is done
And what’s said is now dead
© Alyssa R., Pacific Grove, CA
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kate12345me GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 4:38 am
HEY! I saw your comment on my piece, 'Cry Me A River' and decided to check out some of your work...WOW. Can I just say, you have really good, short lines to convey the idea across and I really, honestly adore that. The fact that it is quite sharp and there is not much flow adds very nicely to the poem's character as well. Initially, I thought, 'Nah, no smoothness,' but I read it again and thought it was better this way! I really, really liked it! I hope you never stop writing because I would hate, and I mean HATE for that to happen. And I never say H-A-T-E...so, yeah! Trust me, you are good. No, that's definitely an understatment...don't stop, okay?! Keep up the amazing stuff :)
albinotiger GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 3:07 pm
THANK you nakabara! i love your comments and your poems! thank U!!
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