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The Torturous Art of Revision

April 16, 2019
By dzhang-20 GOLD, Hillsborough, New Jersey
dzhang-20 GOLD, Hillsborough, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
It’s none of their business that you have to learn to write. Let them think you were born that way.<br /> – Ernest Hemingway


I could be a toddler

knees to chest

sucking the thumb

of sweet release.


I could be glorious King Tut

wrapped like a burrito

with arms glued

to his imperial thighs


or I could be the sarcophagus

confining his royal pillow

without thoughts

without regrets


but Red Bull

caresses my throbbing brain

with punches of

“sleep is for the weak”.


I want my roommate

to wake up early

and apologize

for his contemptuous snores.


I want a pair of doorstops

to prop open the gates

to my bloodshot

eyes.


I want the ancient hieroglyphs

on my LED screen

to become English,

just once more.


Sleep calls me,

but history papers

do not write

themselves.



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