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Like Mine

February 21, 2022
By summerchild GOLD, Chandler, Arizona
summerchild GOLD, Chandler, Arizona
11 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Some of us have been through so much that even something good feels like a set up.”<br /> -Anonymous


I saw

You at school

Holding her hand

Her face looked

Like mine

Her hair looked

Like mine

Her eyes looked

Like mine

Her clothes looked

Like mine

Her laugh sounded

Like mine

Her voice sounded

Like mine

She smells

Like me

Did you just

Replace me

For someone who

Looks

Like me?

Sounds

Like me?

Did you just

Take someone’s

Heart that feels

Like mine?

And leave the one

You started with?

Like mine?



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on Jul. 4 2022 at 2:58 pm
ILiveToRead PLATINUM, Wailuku, Hawaii
24 articles 3 photos 150 comments
You can do better, if they left you for someone who looks like you but isn't you they obviously liked you but couldn't accept you a whole.

Afra ELITE said...
on Jul. 4 2022 at 10:43 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Love the smooth flow of this!!! Your pieces have a lot of emotion and you do have an amazing writing-style...★★★