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Hypothermia

April 19, 2022
By mindfulness SILVER, Studio City, California
mindfulness SILVER, Studio City, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I allow you to think globally. You have the right to the boldest dream."


The angel of freezing death rolls dice in hand

I am her favorite number. I am destined for heaven

It’s not stone she holds. The angel makes ice


Love me first, she whispers. I want you with me tonight.

Her voice hovers above me

Like a snowstorm, she is everywhere

Her fingers are an icy kiss, a brush cross my neck. 

Her lips turn my bones to the permafrost of our bed


She is a coat around me, the satin burning like sleet

Touch me darling. Her breath leaves snowflakes on my eyes

I feel you, I cry. Kiss me again.

Her fingers are a snowy lace 

The filaments disintegrate under my heart.


Suddenly I glow, burn red hot in the airy snows

Is this passion, are we fire, 

Am I burning, is she my pyre?

- Who’s undressing who? -


When the morning sun arises

I, an angel, am the first ray of light

Is my skin stone or ice?

A blueberry could camouflage among my lips.

She spread a halo, left me on a drift

With hair of stalactites 

And a face gouged with sparkling icicles.


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Afra ELITE said...
on May. 10 2022 at 1:09 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

This is so good!!! The diction and the metaphors make this really beautiful and outstanding!!! Love it!!!★★★