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Burnt Out

December 27, 2023
By JenRoxu BRONZE, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
JenRoxu BRONZE, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Like a teardrop of wax, trickling down a candle’s side

Her viscosity ephemeral, her scent sweet and fleeting

Slow and steady, pained and dying


But she’s determined


She thinks she can escape

She believes she can leap from the candle’s shoulder

She wonders if she could fly if she tried


She dreams of freedom


But the merciless, cold air halts her fleeing

Seizes her

Captures her

Shackles her


She hardens, a dry, lonely husk


Many other teardrops have tried

All have dried

All have died


Like a candle, burned to a melted, lonely shell

So empty that it cannot cry anymore

And when the tears stop

The flame goes out

Burnout


The author's comments:

May this piece bring a sense of relatability, solace, and community to anyone who has experienced immense stress and feels as though no one understands their pain and struggles. You are never alone.


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