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daddy told me
young me playing
on the sidewalk
unfazed…for now
dads eyes turning
into pink pools
dad now hunching
now just slouching
towards me after
everybody
vacates out of
elm road for to
night in white clothes
six years on earth
and theres nothing
yet close to you
going away
on that sidewalk
on that sunday
daddy told me
bout the fact that
you wont see me
ever again
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“daddy told me” came from inspiration of the acrostic poem, and poems with shorter lines, such as “The Fish” by Elizabeth Bishop and “There are Birds Here” by Jamaal May. This poem is made in the perspective of a little girl losing her mother. It not only follows the theme and conveys the perspective of the protagonist, but it also follows poetry elements, such as rhythm and acrostic. The saying the first letters of each line says is “you didn’t even say goodbye.” The narrator of this poem is meant to be speaking to her deceased mother. This poem was one of the works where I found a resting spot in the poetry genre.