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You and Me

September 20, 2009
By Volleygirl25 SILVER, Pisgah, Alabama
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Watch your thoughts, for they become words. Watch your words, for they become actions. Watch your actions, for they become habits. Watch your habits, for they become character. Watch your character, for it becomes your destiny.-- Unknown

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It's alright,
I'll just sit here tonight,
And wait for you to relize where you belong.

While you're out having fun,
There is somthing that needs to be done,
And its that you need to know you need me.

I'll give you patience and all my time,
And sit here on my bed and write this silly rhyme,
i cannot live without you.

You seem so happy without me,
But just think of what you and I could be,
I could be your everything.

Think it over and i'll give you your space,
But always remember no one could ever take your place,
i love you.

© Steve S., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
So this is about a guy who just happens to not know i exsist. It probobly sounds like a 5 year old wrote it, but talking about things really do make you feel better.
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bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 12:51 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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No it doesn't sound like a five year old wrote it but it doesn't sound like the words came right from your heart and those are the best poems!

It's vry well written and is quite relatable

I think everyone feels this way about someone at one point or another.

I agree, writing totally helps! Once it's on paper it's no longer trapped in ur head! Writing always makes me feel better.

Keep up the good work! ;)
itsamazzinggrace BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 9:13 am
itsamazzinggrace BRONZE, Barnegat, New Jersey
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agreed with the girl below. very well done :)
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 10:52 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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it does not sound like a five year old wrote it. it was really good