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Confusion
September 11, 2009
Confusion is all the colors of the rainbow
It sounds like that mysterious creaking noise you can’t identify
It tastes like a sour cupcake or a sweet pickle
It smells like a strange stench wafting out from the trash can
It looks like a striped cheetah or a spotted tiger
Confusion makes you feel like you are falling into a jumble of thoughts
© Kevan B., Beaverton, OR
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This article has 13 comments.
boyda said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 5:41 pm
you're welcome, i commented for a school assignment
boyda said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 4:12 pm
Nicely done! I liked when you said "sour cupcake or sweet pickle", that would be very confusing! When you said "strange stench wafting out from the trash can", I could almost smell it! Confusion is quite a strange sensation, and you have captured it well.
kendraelysia SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 11:51 am
Awesome. Nicely done. I like the last bit about falling into a jumble of thoughts.
LunaMica said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:51 pm
I really like this one..for each poet, I think confusion is a bunch of different things. I like how you took your own things, and put them together.
blob said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:10 pm
I thought this poem was really confusing but had a lot of similies. what is your reason for writing this?
maybelaterright said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:10 pm
We like all of your descriptions and similies. And you involed Your senses which made it easier to relate to confusion. Nice work :)
caandcb said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:56 am
overall it was very well thought out and gave me a good idea of what confusion feels like.
dylonmichael GOLD said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 10:39 am
i love your descriptions
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