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Ashes in the Wind

September 27, 2009
By Hallow SILVER, Peru, Indiana
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Hallow SILVER, Peru, Indiana
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Most people don't know how they're gonna feel from one moment to the next, but a dope fiend has a pretty good idea. They just look at the labels on the little bottles.

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You're so close
and our lips meet
but it means nothing
Flesh upon flesh
means nothing
to you

Me?
I'm entirely different
Lips upon lips
Embers upon ashes
our souls intertwining

We're both warm
but I create the heat
and you receive it
absorb it
FEEL it
but you don't produce it
when I'm gone you just fly away with the wind

© Chuck K., Marblehead, MA

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KiraKira PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 6:56 pm
KiraKira PLATINUM, Cardiff By The Sea, California
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Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living, and above all, pity those who live without love -Albus Dumbledore

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Beautiful! I love it! It flows nicely, and the overall feeling is clear. :)
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 2:48 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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I loved this poem. It was beautiful.

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx