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Hurt Me

September 28, 2009
By LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

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If you could see,
What you do to me
you'd understand why I cry these tears,
and shake terribly from all my fears.

I don't want to loose you
But, you make it to where I have to go
so far from this place
so I can't see your face
with your fake little smile
I'll be gone for quite a while.

You said you loved me.
Why did you lie?
Was it that hard?
You said we'd be together,
forever.

Baby, I f***ing love you
but your just the same.
You play this like it's a game
I'm real
I have feelings
and a heart
that you stole from the start
and now we have to be miles apart.

I won't blame it on myself
I won't let it tear me to pieces.
Yes, I'll cry
Yes I'll beg, pray, and plead to die.
But, I'll always be thinking of you
and this you already know
So, from here on
I'll let you go.

© Jennifer A., Plattsburg, MO

The author's comments:
I wrote this about an ex boyfriend I never totally got over.
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LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 7:42 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Your welcome hun :)

i like our stuff alot
Free.The.Poison PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 10:10 pm
Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
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I agree with everyone else who wrote "strong and emotionfil". That is the way I see it. Good job, and I thank you for the nice comments you left me.
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 3:38 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Thanks hun :)
taylorrr GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 9:08 pm
taylorrr GOLD, Fremont, Nebraska
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i loveee it...i totally understand how you got the inspiration
blingblang4eva ELITE said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 6:13 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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amazing poem :) very weell written. lots of emotion. liek the rhyming scheme.
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:23 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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thank u :)
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:22 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Aw thanks hun
rengeki SILVER said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:11 pm
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yea i understand completely i just went through it, but anyways it nice
PoetryinMotion329 BRONZE said...
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Very strong poetry.. I feel where ur coming from. Ur words formed a train straight to my heart. Inspiring...
Mizotron GOLD said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 8:55 pm
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Omg that was sooo good :) keep going ur doin great