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Pyramid of Broken Hearts.

October 10, 2009
By cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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It’s been around,
Longer than those other pyramids.
It grows every second,
Adding pieces of hearts.

We women,
Fall for you men,
Then receive a broken heart,
That heart,
Is placed on top.

The Pyramid of Broken Hearts,
Is bigger than life itself,
It is the one thing,
Every girl has in common.

© Chelsea L.,New City, NY

The author's comments:
I was doodleiing on my algebra notes (maybe thats why im making a B in that class...) and i was drawing random hearts. Then without even thinking i looked down and i had made a pyramid. Inspiration flodded my body and i made a note to write a poem. Hope yall enjoy!!
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cheyenneduhon PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 8:39 pm
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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Thanks for the cmpliments & support!!
unwrittenlove DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 8:35 pm
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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&quot;If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be&quot; -anonymous

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I liked it! :) My broken hearts have been added to that pyramid! keep writing! you will make a wonderful poet! :)