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The Lovely Longing

October 16, 2009
By Cherie777 SILVER, Vacaville, California
Cherie777 SILVER, Vacaville, California
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A silent kiss upon the lips of lovely longing
My love, he has taken my heart and left a ransom note
He invited these words from my lips and made them dance out of my mouth
Our hearts have become one, beating together in the sound of a single drum

We will not build our Lord’s holy castle in the sand, for the ocean will wash it away,
Effervescent in its frothy undulation and swift departure
We will build His castle in our intertwined hearts, exquisitely and intricately pure
Delicately shaping it into perfect splendor

Intimately and uniquely symbolizing: us



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on Oct. 31 2009 at 10:31 pm
Cherie777 SILVER, Vacaville, California
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Thank you!

on Oct. 25 2009 at 4:02 pm
XxletsfireitupxX SILVER, Glendora, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Nobody has ever measured, not even poets, how much a heart can hold." -Zelda Fitzgerald

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