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October 27, 2009
By qwertyqwerty123 PLATINUM, Concord, California
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qwertyqwerty123 PLATINUM, Concord, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;prey on the old and your a coward<br /> prey on the young and your pathetic<br /> prey on the weak and your even weaker<br /> prey on my friends and your history&quot;<br /> - fearless: payback (book 6) by francine pascal

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On and on and on
It never ends
It's never gone
In a circle it bends

It doesn't matter
That it's old now
I hear my laughter
This will end how?

The author's comments:
I actually wrote this while listening to my English teacher instruct, but when you think about it, it can apply to many things - more profound ones. Besides, when you don't know its origins, it kinda sounds deep (at least at first).
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InnocentPoet BRONZE said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 5:21 pm
InnocentPoet BRONZE, Floral Park, New York
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&quot;Stories are for joining the past to the future... Stories are for eternity, when memory is erased, when there is nothing left to remember except the story.&quot; - &quot;The Things They Carried&quot; by Tim O&#039;Brien

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this one keeps me thinking. I like it. Gave it a 3 because I believe there's always more room for improvement :)