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October 27, 2009
By Robert Garcia BRONZE, Boyne City, Michigan
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Really?
Will I ever get over this
This feeling of loneliness
Loneliness that has struck me by surprise
Surprise that came on a monday
A Monday that brought us together
Together we were happy
Happy only for a while
A while that only lasted 3 weeks
3 weeks that I ain't going to forget...

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mellow_melon PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 13 2009 at 10:01 pm
mellow_melon PLATINUM, Jefferson, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but my the number of moments that take our breath away.&quot;

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i really liked how you started each line with the end of the line before that was really neat....good job!