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November 7, 2009
By xxMissingyouxx GOLD, Newfield, New Jersey
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"love is like a butterfly, hold it too close, it'll crush.. hold it too loose, it'll fly away"

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You never tell me you love me
Your never around
But when you are
I feel that your not here for me
Why can't you tell me what's wrong
Is it me?
Is it you?
Or is it us?

© Luke S., Montclair, NJ

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i would think that most of you guys that read this has been through this, i hope i'm not the only one. please comment.thnx
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babygirl576 PLATINUM said...
on May. 15 2012 at 8:55 am
babygirl576 PLATINUM, Marion, Michigan
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You lied, and I cried. You&#039;re a jerk, so I was hurt. You&#039;re a<br /> deceiver, But I was a believer. Sorry I wasted your time, I guess?

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your never alone; it just seems like you are. Comment my poems
ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 10:08 am
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
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good poem, good message. And alone, never.... please comment my poems
xXOneWishXx BRONZE said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 9:07 pm
xXOneWishXx BRONZE, Sewell, New Jersey
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Your defiently not the only one, life jus sucks like that sometimes...but everyone gets through it eventually.
Ms.me_2 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 5:30 pm
Ms.me_2 BRONZE, Lake Mary, Florida
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I know I've been through it and am going through it but I know I'm going to come out a winner in the end.
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 2:50 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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I like this poem and how you question to hint you're confused. Great poem. Come and check mind if you'd like. Thanks.
Snap Crackle Pop said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 6:39 pm
omg this is so sweet but its so true in life i love this one
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 9:47 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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i liked it. it was good. check out some of my work please
Slevin91 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 7:58 pm
Slevin91 BRONZE, Rolling Hills, California
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I agree--I love the simplicity but this might err too much on the side of leaving us wondering.
mellow_melon PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 4:51 pm
mellow_melon PLATINUM, Jefferson, Maryland
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i love the last three lines, because its like saying is it one of us thats the problem, or do we just not mix? well that was my interpretation haha but it was good! i thought it couldve flowed a little better in tee beginning but it was good, and i thought the way you ended it was very powerful
writerxchicx SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 9:36 am
writerxchicx SILVER, Wyalusing, Pennsylvania
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I like that this is easy to relate to and it's simple. I think that everyone has been through this (I'm going through it now) which is great. I would have liked more emotion coming through but otherwise, great job!
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 2:52 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx
Hallow SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 10:48 am
Hallow SILVER, Peru, Indiana
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It's simple, which I like, but I think it lacks in definition. It's really easy to relate to, which is good, but the emotion isn't as expressed as I would like.