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..love you could call it

November 7, 2009
By xxMissingyouxx GOLD, Newfield, New Jersey
xxMissingyouxx GOLD, Newfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"love is like a butterfly, hold it too close, it'll crush.. hold it too loose, it'll fly away"


When you look into her eyes
You see him
When you look into his eyes
You see her
And when she dies
You will see him with her
LOVE can never die
But the corpses linger with their beloved
That's TRUE LOVE


The author's comments:
hopefully this is what love is..cant wait to find out

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on Dec. 7 2009 at 7:29 pm
xXOneWishXx BRONZE, Sewell, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Most people wish for Money, Success, Fame, but my One and Only wish was for you to be happy, even if it means i'm not.

free verse, lol honestly im not even sure its poetry i just wrote it...i barley remeber wut it says, themagic of copy n paste lol, i just copied it from a word document

on Dec. 7 2009 at 5:35 pm
xxMissingyouxx GOLD, Newfield, New Jersey
13 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is like a butterfly, hold it too close, it'll crush.. hold it too loose, it'll fly away"

awh thats sweet is it like a song..or a free verse?

on Dec. 6 2009 at 8:23 pm
xXOneWishXx BRONZE, Sewell, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Most people wish for Money, Success, Fame, but my One and Only wish was for you to be happy, even if it means i'm not.

its about love kinda, lol i wrote it a while ago when my girlfriend broke up wit me

on Dec. 6 2009 at 7:59 pm
xxMissingyouxx GOLD, Newfield, New Jersey
13 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is like a butterfly, hold it too close, it'll crush.. hold it too loose, it'll fly away"

awh thanks..actually i don't really like this one though its a bit too dark for me....oh whats your poem about btw..

on Dec. 1 2009 at 4:45 pm
xXOneWishXx BRONZE, Sewell, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Most people wish for Money, Success, Fame, but my One and Only wish was for you to be happy, even if it means i'm not.

Wow Thats amazing...i hope to find out too