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Why Did You Say GoodBye?

November 7, 2009
By Deverie♥ SILVER, Carthage, Illinois
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Deverie♥ SILVER, Carthage, Illinois
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I will seriously kick your butt....verbally.

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Fragile hellos and Broken goodbyes.
Only you could Lie looking into My Eyes..

Fragile hellos and Broken goodbyes.
I wish You would have Never seen me Cry..

Fragile hellos and Broken goodbyes.
You have Enough Strength to make me want to Die..

© Krystal B., Bloomingdale, IL

The author's comments:
Umm..an ex boyfriend really upset me in many ways..so that was a depressing time in my life; thinking back to how he made me feel inspired me to write this.
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Deverie♥ SILVER said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 4:53 pm
Deverie♥ SILVER, Carthage, Illinois
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I will seriously kick your butt....verbally.

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thankyou.

I could many more on here but it would probably scare somebody lol
brianj BRONZE said...
on Feb. 12 2010 at 11:27 am
brianj BRONZE, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
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deep and meaningful....i love it!!!!!!!

the repetition makes it memorable and there's a lot of feeling since it's based on real life. ha ha and nice picture.
Deverie♥ SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 9:19 pm
Deverie♥ SILVER, Carthage, Illinois
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I will seriously kick your butt....verbally.

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That picture looks very similar to my best friend. :)