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November 25, 2009
By alexisjo SILVER, Roanoke, Texas
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alexisjo SILVER, Roanoke, Texas
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fearless doesn't mean you're unafraid, it means you're terrified, but you jump anyway. <3

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Your personality has gotten the best of me.
How breathtaking can you be?
I need a chance.
But you wont even take a second glace.
Well Isn't that promising?
That deep urge in me to keep going?
Isn't that promising?
The way I pick myself up just to fall?
Isn't that frusturating,
Irritating,
Intoxicating,
Isn't that promising?

© Brit H., Peabody, MA

The author's comments:
I tried to make this a song at first.. but it didn't workk out so i made it a poem (:
YEAH BOYYY :D
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