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Love In You

December 4, 2009
By Rage97 GOLD, Hughesville, Maryland
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&quot; 3 out of 2 people have problems with fractions&quot; <br /> &quot; History will be kind to me, for I intend to write it&quot;

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I found love in you,
but I can't understand why,
I found hope in you,
when I thought it was gone,
I found color again,
no more greys and blacks,
I found love in,
wich was unrequited,
I still love you,
but your love belongs to another,
I have tryed everything to make you notice, without my temple being violated, I wonder, what would make you love me too, if I lost ten ponds, if I dyed my hair, if I became new;
I found love in you,
and I can't understan why,
all I know is that your love is with another, and the pieces of heart are broken, like pieces of shattered glass

© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA

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Hope you like my poem of the worst kind of love unrequited love!!!!
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Rage97 GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2010 at 5:04 am
Rage97 GOLD, Hughesville, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; 3 out of 2 people have problems with fractions&quot; <br /> &quot; History will be kind to me, for I intend to write it&quot;

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Thank you, and you work is kick but I cryed it's really good!!!!!!! Love lots lilly
Katie.T. GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 4:51 pm
Katie.T. GOLD, Chaptico, Maryland
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&quot;Why go for a 100%, when with a little more, you can have 110%.&quot; -KT

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Well I love to rate and/or comment on poems that I like. I enjoy when people rate mine so I always try to do the same for others. Also, I seem to not get much feedback either, so your not alone!
Rage97 GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 12:41 pm
Rage97 GOLD, Hughesville, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; 3 out of 2 people have problems with fractions&quot; <br /> &quot; History will be kind to me, for I intend to write it&quot;

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Thank you so much for viewing my poem I haven't had much feed back on my poems, It meens a lot to know I can achieve my main goal which is to relate and bring real feeling to my pieces
Katie.T. GOLD said...
on Dec. 28 2009 at 1:54 pm
Katie.T. GOLD, Chaptico, Maryland
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&quot;Why go for a 100%, when with a little more, you can have 110%.&quot; -KT

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So relatable... I love reading poems about love because that is what most of my poems are about. Keep it up!
Rage97 GOLD said...
on Dec. 28 2009 at 10:09 am
Rage97 GOLD, Hughesville, Maryland
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&quot; 3 out of 2 people have problems with fractions&quot; <br /> &quot; History will be kind to me, for I intend to write it&quot;

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Thank you so much for the comment and I'm at that point to, you'll get through it!!!
OneChance GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2009 at 7:22 pm
OneChance GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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i like this, it is sorta my lfe right now. well keep writing!!