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I never thought

December 11, 2009
By DidiT SILVER, Wharton, Texas
DidiT SILVER, Wharton, Texas
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when tears start to fall look up into the sun so your tiny teardrops become beautiful rainbows...


I never thought it would hurt this bad, to let you go. I never thought hearing your voice would make my heart stop. I never thought being without you would make me feel so alone, without you im lost I never should have let you go. Never should we have ended the way we did. I cant help but smile when I see you, just so you dont know im really hurting inside, its all fake smiles, all fake laughs, because deep down inside, im alone and hurt!


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KatEbby SILVER said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 4:42 pm
KatEbby SILVER, North Andover, Massachusetts
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Anyone who says they have only one life to live must not know how to read a book.

I can feel your pain radiating through these words, but that is a good thing. The raw emotion is both powerfull and deeply touching. Your emotions shine through without the use of impractical overdramatics which is a lovely breath of fresh air. I think that this poem is very good, well done. :)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:40 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx