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Rain Drops

December 20, 2009
By LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
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LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
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"Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death"

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Drip, drip, drip, tap, tap, tap, it’s all around me, it soaked my clothes and yet it felt so good. It wasn’t too cold but it seemed just right against my skin. I loved it all the smell, the feeling, the moment I kissed her in the rain. It was like the world disappeared when our lips met, like the angels were crying at the sight of this beautiful moment. It was a slow dance yet there was no music, not fancy dance routine. It was just the two of us kissing in the rain. We were inseparable. We were lovers kissing in the rain, Our minds locked on each other, are emotions ran free. I had almost forgot I had to breathe. I took a step back and looked intently into her eyes and said I love you!

© Terrin C., Humboldt, IA

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