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When i stare into her eyes

December 22, 2009
By LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
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When i stare into her eyes alls she sees is me.
She can see through all of the lies.
The side that i let everyone see.
Only when i stare into her eyes.

When i stare into her eyes.
alls she sees is the love.
the love that noone buys.
this love fits her like a glove.
only when i stare into her eyes.

© Carlie C., Portland, OR

The author's comments:
this is a poem that my friend SETH wrote. He wrote it for his future one n only......my friend that wrote this is the one who taught me how to write poetry
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