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Gone Without a Trace

January 9, 2010
By literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we&#039;re going.&quot; Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls<br /> &quot;The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound.&quot; Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde


What have you done with that girl I once knew?
I’ve looked everywhere, but she seems nowhere now.
You’ve taken her, hidden her from my view.
I know she used to laugh and be happy,
But now that she’s gone, nothing seems true.
She used to be me, and I was once her,
The day I let her go I still rue.
Can I still get her back? Or is it too late?



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on Feb. 24 2010 at 2:51 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

I like this.

It kind of reminds me of my poem

"Renegade"

Its about a girl who lost herself due to the fact of wanting to be with someone who was trouble for her. Even though people tried to help her, she still stuck to her beliefs. Please check that out.

But otherwise, this piece is nice.

Do keep writing!

I'm looking forward to more of your work.

on Feb. 21 2010 at 4:21 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we&#039;re going.&quot; Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls<br /> &quot;The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound.&quot; Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

about this piece, since i forgot to write it when i submitted it: this isn't about me or about anyone i know. i just wanted to write about all the lost souls in our world and maybe try to feel their pain.