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Perfect White

January 3, 2010
By Diabetic_Wonder GOLD, Michigan Center, Michigan
Diabetic_Wonder GOLD, Michigan Center, Michigan
14 articles 11 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams" ---- Dr. Seuss


The thunder rolls, the lightning strikes
the carpet is painted white.
The rain pounds, the wind blows
leaves are what fall to the ground.
My tears are flowing,
they stain that oh so perfect
white carpet red.
They drain my heart like a drought
because you my dear have
ripped it out.
You said you cared, but I guess
you lied.
So let me cry so I can stain
that oh so perfect white.



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on Apr. 25 2010 at 4:15 pm
Diabetic_Wonder GOLD, Michigan Center, Michigan
14 articles 11 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams" ---- Dr. Seuss

Naw, I'm not really that good. I just know how to express things that I feel with heart.

on Apr. 25 2010 at 2:15 pm
musiclover114 SILVER, Woodstock, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn&#039;t about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself.<br /> <br /> born an original, why die a copy?

no prob ur a really really good writer:)

on Apr. 24 2010 at 9:45 am
Diabetic_Wonder GOLD, Michigan Center, Michigan
14 articles 11 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams&quot; ---- Dr. Seuss

thank you!

on Apr. 23 2010 at 9:28 pm
musiclover114 SILVER, Woodstock, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn&#039;t about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself.<br /> <br /> born an original, why die a copy?

ive been reading alot of your work and ur a very very good writer im sorrya bout ur diabetes as well please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!