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Another Open Sore

January 14, 2010
By Beautiful-Nightmare BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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Beautiful-Nightmare BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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"Lost everywhere can be so easy,but lost I am NOT because it's easy to find me."

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I hate seeing you with another girl because it breaks my heart so badly.I walk around with my head down,looking around so sadly.I hate to hear rumors saying "you like me" when you really don't.In my dreams I always see you marry me but in reality,I know you won't.I hate to see you look in my eyes,confusing me even more.I start to think you like me again but I realize I'm just opening a closed door.But I know you're not good for me;its just another open sore.

© Shirley Y., Metuchen, NJ

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When I wrote this poem,I wrote it out of anger like you probably can tell.I was angry because the boy that I really liked was really confusing me and everything in this poem is true.So I hope you can relate to it and give me new ideas.
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