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January 19, 2010
By soccerhawks09 SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
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"What are men compared to rocks and mountains" Pride and Prejudice

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My feelings fall from the sky
Like the tears on my face
I would have to lie
The truth is out in case

The thunder pounds
Like my heart when I'm with you
Through all the leaps and bounds
For you I wish it were true

Lightning surges not far from here
Illuminating my eyes
When you are near
So don't act so surprised

Just stop
Your fingers caressed down me
Like individual rain drops
I wish you could just see

Me as me...

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

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Nothing like a metaphor for love from afar.
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