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January 13, 2010
By alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

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Could it be that I am falling
Could it be that I am there
Could what I hear be the calliing
of the story then the fear

Have I been struck by foolishness
Is there some way out
Am I the one here loosing it
Or am I way too weak for doubt

In this poem that I've written will erase all my fears
A piece of the story more than one has bitten
has washed away all of my dreadful tears

© Amanda P., Clermont, FL

The author's comments:
This poem explains my feelings of confusion and if I have mastered my masterpiece, the reader will be confused too.
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HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jun. 5 2010 at 12:57 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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huh, very kool!! :DD
alayapoetgirl BRONZE said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 1:40 pm
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Gracias Amiga!! lol
NelliiBaybhex3 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 13 2010 at 7:53 pm
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this is a really nice peice ♥