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January 25, 2010
By PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
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PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I shall never give up, make believe is too much fun."

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Tell me how?
How do I get it all back?
The tender hugs?
The gentle kisses?
The cozy cuddles?

I did my best
To keep us together
You obviously thought
It metiocre.

You dropped me
Like a hot potato,
Like a rotten vegetable,
Like an ugly troll.

Tell me how?
How could I ever
Deserve to be treated
Like this?
What did I do?

I gave you my heart
Now I want it back.
Thank you for all
Your "love"
But I no longer wish
To be played a fool.
To be used and thrown away.

I will no longer be
Treated like this.
Good day!

© Monica L., St. George, UT

The author's comments:
I wish to get nothing out of this poem. It was a release for me. It allowed for me to let my ex go, to realize he was not the one for me. Thank you for taking your time to read this.
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HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 4:03 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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good job!! :) nice voice. i really liked the ending too.
distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 8:51 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

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Wow, you are such a talented writer! I wrote a poem called Who Cares, and I wrote that b/c I needed to vent! Lol :) I LOVE your work keep it up!!!!!!!!!! :) 5 stars!!!