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SINKING Down...

January 24, 2010
By allgood15 SILVER, Quitman, Mississippi
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Sinking down so very low
My shadow follows me everywhere i go
To be all alone
And asking for a helping hand
Im reacching out
And im almost gone
But no one understands
That a broken heart
is what drove me in the sand
So as im sinking down
Just wave goodbye
Lifes not fair
So don't bother to cry
You never helped me
You just broke me down
So ill no longer hurt
because of you
Im dead in the dirt
Im through
no pain no sound
Only memmories remain
While im under the ground

© Miranda R., Wyoming, MI

The author's comments:
This is a personel poem i just wrote to show others that getting your heart broke isn't the only feeling you can recieve and get over alone .That it's always good to have that helping hand.
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sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 3:00 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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aww no problem. just plz keep writing! ;)
allgood15 SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 10:38 am
allgood15 SILVER, Quitman, Mississippi
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Thanks so much your comment means alot. it made my day!!
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:38 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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i luv the emotion u put into it. poetry is definetly ur thing! of course, i haven't ever read any stories from u ;) overall, u being an awesome writer says it all
allgood15 SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 4:50 pm
allgood15 SILVER, Quitman, Mississippi
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This poem is for difficult times. I wrote it because I fully understand it.