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Helpless

February 13, 2010
By Natalie4ya GOLD, Laredo, Texas
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Natalie4ya GOLD, Laredo, Texas
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"To each his own" "Love is being stupid together"

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I want to be with him
Right now
I liked feeling his warmth
The slowness of his breath
As he slept
The mellow that washed over me
That moment…
When we were playing
Like children
And he shoved his face in mine
Daring me to blink
I bite my lip
To keep myself from closing that little distance
Between us
Doing the unthinkable…
I wish he was here now
My thoughts are such a jumble
He calms me down…
Repeating it over and over again
And I melt inside…
Helpless

© Sarah S., Poland Spring, ME

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What can I say? We all feel helpless sometimes...
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MarkRuff SILVER said...
on Oct. 8 2011 at 2:10 am
MarkRuff SILVER, Allen, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"In order for this system to work, they have to mine our minds to get at the essence of our spirit. This is the pollution, and it's a disease, and it lives and travels through the mind, through the generations." -John Trudell

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I know the feeling!!! This, in my opinion is very beutifully written and gives me a calm, suddle, or even somber image in my head!! it kinda relaxes me you know? Anyway, keep the nice writing and I know for sure that you'll aprove! :)

 

megsloveslions GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 4:28 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Wow really good!  I totally know the feeling!  Please check out some of my work?
Natalie4ya GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 6:50 pm
Natalie4ya GOLD, Laredo, Texas
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"To each his own" "Love is being stupid together"

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Thankyou:)
dolphin13 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 5:41 pm
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
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This is beautiful! I love it so much!