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A Deadly Friendship

February 9, 2010
By Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
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Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
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&quot;The people who don&#039;t know me think i am quiet, the people who do wish i were&quot;<br /> &quot;I can only please one person per day, today is not your day...tomorrow probably isn&#039;t either&quot;

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I stand in the rain though the water is cold
This pain is to much for me to behold
Your screams go out into the silent night
I am sorry i gave you such a terrible fright
But you were going to leave me all on my own
And you were all i had as a strong backbone
So now i have found a way to be together
Because if we both die you can't leave me ever

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece while i was in my creative writing class, i was thinking of my best friend and i wondered how i would feel with out her. So i took my own feelings as sorrow and made them more extreame to compleat desperation for the charecter in the poem.
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Marina303 SILVER said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 7:44 pm
Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who don&#039;t know me think i am quiet, the people who do wish i were&quot;<br /> &quot;I can only please one person per day, today is not your day...tomorrow probably isn&#039;t either&quot;

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this is not the one i changed
Dancer412 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:52 pm
Dancer412 BRONZE, Greer, South Carolina
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&quot;Choice is the most holy act you can do. Everything in you life is made up of what you choose.&quot;

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I love how you changed it abby!!!
annA ecarG nosdrahciR said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:08 pm
annA ecarG nosdrahciR, East Of No Where, South Carolina
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well may be I will change my mind. . . *ghostly sounds*
Marina303 SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:06 pm
Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who don&#039;t know me think i am quiet, the people who do wish i were&quot;<br /> &quot;I can only please one person per day, today is not your day...tomorrow probably isn&#039;t either&quot;

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gee thanks...i am glad you are not going to kill me
annA ecarG nosdrahciR said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:03 pm
annA ecarG nosdrahciR, East Of No Where, South Carolina
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You are very talented. . . I am not going to show up at your doorstep and kill you. Write more poems. . .so the world can see how great of a poet you are. . .and how undead you are. . .so if will excuse me I am going to find some crappy poet and stab them to death. . . just kidding I actually am a normal (relative term) person. . . so good bye
annA ecarG nosdrahciR said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:00 pm
annA ecarG nosdrahciR, East Of No Where, South Carolina
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I am sorry so I am going to comment :-)
Marina303 SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 4:37 pm
Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who don&#039;t know me think i am quiet, the people who do wish i were&quot;<br /> &quot;I can only please one person per day, today is not your day...tomorrow probably isn&#039;t either&quot;

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i love how no body comments on the things i put...oh well