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Thinking Is Trouble My Friend

February 9, 2010
By Stephanie.Marie GOLD, Manasss, Virginia
Stephanie.Marie GOLD, Manasss, Virginia
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you wasted life why wouldn't you waste the after life" modest mouse.


They closed our minds and forgot about it
they sewed their thoughts so deep in there
we cannot think different
nor do we care

But some have noticed the lingering threads
they closed our minds and forgot about it
we have been born with thoughts, not of our own
we cannot think different

they told us think free
but some have noticed the lingeing threads
unattended by them,so careless
we have been born with thoughts, not of or own

our eyes are told to see what THEY want us to see
they told us to think free
it's difficult when our minds are molded by them
unattended by them, so careless

the threads are breaking
our eyes are told what they want us to see
but they don't realize the seam is shattered
it's difficult when our minds are molded by them

we are lucky for the carelessness of their hands
the threads are brekaing
they are still content with their work
but they don't realize the seam is shattered

our minds are now left to fend for themselves
we are lucky for the carelessnes of their hands
most people won't notice though
they are still content with their work

humans will not break away easily
our minds are now left to fend for themsleves
the seam is broken,there thoughts unattached to our brains
most people won't notice though

break free what we have been told
humans will not break away easily
trained by them to have someone think for us
the seam is broken,their thoughts unattached to our brain

the power is not recognized by the simple
break free is what we have been told
you have been given a choice
trained by them to have someone think for you?


The author's comments:
Another version of 'Hello World'. a better version.

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writ3r BRONZE said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 10:56 pm
writ3r BRONZE, Rockville, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"unfortunate" or "sweet stakes"

your my hero that is the best poem ive read all day