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Paradise Within a World

February 18, 2010
By G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
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G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
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Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decide to see beyond the imperfections.

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In a world that I strive to be set free
In a world that I want to spread my wings
In a world that chaos walks among us

Lies…

The key to heaven
The keyhole that keeps it protected
A pen and a notebook
My paradise

Where…

Inspiration flows like a river on the mountains
The feeling of fulfillment rises like the sun
Light overshadows darkness
Whispers of wisdom are spoken

I exist in one world
But I live within another
Which lets me be or not to be
Who I am

© Cara K.,Cheney, WA

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sunnyhunny PLATINUM said...
on May. 19 2010 at 2:57 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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&quot;An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.&quot;<br /> -Ghandi

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Very expressive and relatable.  I really like this!

 

wpalacio said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 12:54 pm
I like your poems allot and i am not one read many poems >>>>> love you sis
BeatrizHD said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:48 am
I can't think of any poem I've read that I can relate to more than this
G.J.Velez SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 5:10 pm
G.J.Velez SILVER, Florida, Other
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In the fell clutch of circumstance<br /> I have not winced nor cried aloud.<br /> Under the bludgeoning of chance<br /> My head is bloody, but unbowed.<br /> <br /> ~~William Hernest Henley~~<br /> <br /> ~INVICTUS~

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A true look at the mind of a wise person. Great poem