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Il'l Be Remembered

February 12, 2010
By allgood15 SILVER, Quitman, Mississippi
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il'l be remembered by the things iv'e done
And by the things iv'e did
The things i have lost
And the things i have won
The momment my life is done
And they close the lid
But my time is drawing near
My watch is ticking slow
I'm sorry my family dear
But soon il'l have to go
My body is dieing down
I'm sorry again to say
You all will soon have to lay me in the ground
Soon one day
I'm getting weak by the hour
Every step I take
Speaking my mind on paper
Is not being a cowared
It's a choice I chose to make
Il'l miss you all
Yall will always be in my heart
Dead or alive
We will never be apart
So the day I die
Remember what I say
Keep me in your thoughts everyday
And do me a favor for me when I'm gone
Don't cry
Just know inside your heart that I'm home

© Becky F., Sacramento, CA

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losing my grandma about a month ago and i wrote this to give myself some closer.
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allgood15 SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 5:00 pm
allgood15 SILVER, Quitman, Mississippi
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thank u for the 5 stars it helps every bit!
allgood15 SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 4:59 pm
allgood15 SILVER, Quitman, Mississippi
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thank u so much i tried my best...
redcg416 SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 5:41 pm
redcg416 SILVER, Parker, Colorado
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This was so sad and sweet. It reminds me of my own losses. I loved every word. It flowed nicley. Excellent Job!
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on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:36 pm
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great job. this is very touching and meaningful. a few spelling errors, but that's all i have to say 4 criticism. u get 5 starzz from me ;))
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on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:28 pm
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx