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February 22, 2010
By ChrisAMoore PLATINUM, Saint Augustine, Florida
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ChrisAMoore PLATINUM, Saint Augustine, Florida
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Hey guys I have old work on this profile, but I stopped for about two years now. I got back into it now because I found that art and expression is me. So I hope you like the things I post from now on more lol

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just look at me
you got me sitting here
im full of tears
wishing you were here

you say you love me(but somehow it doesnt)
quite comfort me(dont get me wrong)
your loves my everything(i just need to feel)
your warmth upon me
...
to be continued.

The author's comments:
hmm...i think she knows i worte this for her. ilove her a lot.really. and i always will. she said the same thing too. its just, were not able to be together yet. so its hard. iwrote this last night thinking bout her. =Y im missin her like crazy. t.amo carol**)
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ChrisAMoore PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 4:39 pm
ChrisAMoore PLATINUM, Saint Augustine, Florida
24 articles 8 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hey guys I have old work on this profile, but I stopped for about two years now. I got back into it now because I found that art and expression is me. So I hope you like the things I post from now on more lol

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From the Guy who wrote this...: omg lol thats embarassing-ly bad! haha