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Wishing i could

February 24, 2010
By breakaway.from.death PLATINUM, Lehigh Acres, Florida
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breakaway.from.death PLATINUM, Lehigh Acres, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
'My heart is like a blackhole, It has no dark end.'

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My world used to be,
Dark, scary,
And lonely.
Until one day,
I found him.
He brought his light,
Into my world.

Brightening my darkness,
Scaring away the scary,
Leaving behind the lonelyness.
He saved me,
From the demons.
They almost consumed me,
They almost took me away.

He's light,
Brightens my world.
My world gets brighter,
More and more,
Each day.

When i'm with you,
I feel complete.
When we're apart,
I feel empty.
When i'm alone,
I think about you,
I think about us.

Wishing i could,
Be with you.
Wishing i could,
Hold you so.

© Grace L., Bacolod City, Philippines

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breakaway.from.death PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2010 at 7:58 am
breakaway.from.death PLATINUM, Lehigh Acres, Florida
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thanks and i will check them out
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 5:44 pm
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This is good! I like how you shortened your sentences until you were to the end... well done! Keep writing and check out my work too:-)
Squishy-Squish SILVER said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 6:24 pm
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Nice :) I love it. He's one spcial boy. [Remember not in the halls]
blankpages12 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 10:33 am
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that is woahh great..i love it