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Still Spinning

February 28, 2010
By CarlyDudek PLATINUM, Ft. Wayne, Indiana
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Love is when your heart stop beating because of the electric shock you get from a simple smile. Love is no consequences, love is not caring what people think, love is feeling alive and living for him/her, love is when you kno your complete

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Whisper, Look
Whisper, Stare
Look around
And I am right there

I’m sorry I am so trustworthy
I am sorry I tell the truth
I am oh so sorry
I care more for others than I do you

We are going around in circles
Hoping for a change
Still Spinning out of control
An animal no one can tame

Do you think that I am crazy?
Do you think that I am insane?
Do you think that I am paranoid?
Do you think that I am Vain?


I think that you are lonely.
I think you’re losing your life to this.
I think you need some help.
The old you is who I miss.

© Kim B., Marblehead, MA

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