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Tears

March 5, 2010
By amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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My tears drop to the ground
I blink trying to keep them inside
But I can't
They keep flowing out
Like a waterfall
I feel horrible inside
Sometimes I feel like I need to cry
Just let it all out
In the end,
I wipe my eyes
Stand up
And I am ready to move on
With my life.



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on Jun. 16 2010 at 10:55 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

Wow i love this!!! this is awesome-soooo good!!! please check out some of my work-it would mean a lot!!!! thanks

on Jun. 1 2010 at 1:23 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I know I've already commented on this at some pt, but I just re-read it and fell in love with this poem all over again!

on May. 11 2010 at 7:19 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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Thank you so much!!! :-) I am so glad you like it! :-)

on May. 11 2010 at 7:19 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 59 comments
Your welcome for posting on your article. And thank you so so much!!! It means a lot to me that people like my work. When i first got on here i thought nobody was going to look at my work and you know i guess i was wrong. Thanks so much! :-)

on May. 10 2010 at 4:42 pm
Muzic4MeAlwayz SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is a perfect bond of union.&quot;

Hey thanks for commenting on my demi lovato article...and this is a beautiful poem very deep :)

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on May. 8 2010 at 12:08 pm
Howler GOLD, Cerritos, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is not abut the number of breaths you take but about the moments that take your breath away&quot;

hey! I like this one! Its simple and really good!

on May. 7 2010 at 8:23 pm
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 59 comments
Thanks so much! I am happy people are liking my writings. If you want you can look at some of my other writings??

on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:07 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
-Biting&#039;s excellent. It&#039;s like kissing only there&#039;s a winner.&quot;-Doctor Who, The Tardis

i like this, good job.

on Apr. 7 2010 at 7:50 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 59 comments
Thank you so much!!! Thanks! I am glad you liked it.

on Apr. 6 2010 at 4:06 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I like this... I'm the type to hold and bottle everything in.. [i hate crying.. shhh... ] lol but the way you wrote this and the way it came together in the end is pretty good.

on Mar. 24 2010 at 7:41 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 59 comments
Feel free to comment on the poem. Thanks!