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March 9, 2010
By mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
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"The whole world looked drunk, and I liked it that way." - Rebeca Godfrey, book title"The Torn skirt"

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Your always gone
you never loved me
you never gave me a chance
but i love you
you hurt me , you hurt mother
i cry when i see your face, when i hear your voice
but i love you
always angry, always loud,
always sad , blaming me and us
but i love you
we couldn't take it
we couldn't stand it
so we left you behind
i could still feel the bruises abd cuts
the scars in me burning
we may have left you
but you left you sadness with me

Why do i love?

© Amanda T., Scituate, MA

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mindymax GOLD said...
on May. 26 2010 at 3:19 pm
mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
10 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The whole world looked drunk, and I liked it that way.&quot; - Rebeca Godfrey, book title&quot;The Torn skirt&quot;

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Awsome poem!!!!!!!

Keep writing poems!!!

----Travis-----