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Utopia
March 24, 2010
I see the gray clouds clearing
And her beautiful eyes tearing
The shining sun comes out now
And I wipe the sweat from my brow
In accordance is the beauty
(ebullience, ebullience)
To be with only me
Forever, I love her
The horizon so deep
Deep in the blue sea
The orca are so free
Like I never could be
I can't get any sleep
But I don’t mean to weep
I've been dead through my prime
Until now, now it's my time
This is my lightest hour
No more reason to cower
And I appreciate the world
So much more
Than ever before
For once I'm at peace
And I feel…
(euphoria, euphoria)
Feel so good
To be alive and free
Feel so happy
To be nothing but me
© Laycie C., Stockton, CA
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on Apr. 19 2010 at 9:48 pm
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Milo! said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 3:32 pm
I really liked the rhyme scheme in the third quatrain: abbbaa. I've tried different rhyme schemes, but they didn't quite work out. I envy the fluidity of this.
