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My Pain

March 23, 2010
By Kibitzer101 SILVER, Leland, North Carolina
Kibitzer101 SILVER, Leland, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nothing is always something and something is always nothing.&quot;<br /> &quot;Fate is Hate, Love is cruel, but Happiness is everlasting.&quot;


Waiting for my soul to take,
Her pain away from me,
So I could say.
That you saw the pain
hidden in my eyes.
As we said our goodbyes.
I didn't want to let you
Go, So.
Why don't you turn around and look at me.
I am the same as I used to be
Now look at yourself looking the same way back when you loved me.


The author's comments:
"A poem that I wrote many years ago and has been engraved into my soul."

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on Apr. 19 2010 at 8:50 am
thank you for talking you time to reading my poem

on Apr. 17 2010 at 5:32 pm
lifeisajourney GOLD, Coronado, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is a journey not a destination...&quot;<br /> &quot;Perhaps our eyes need to be washed by our tears once in a while, so that we can see life in a clearer view again.&quot;<br /> &quot;Only those who will go too far, can possibly find out how far one can go&quot;

This is really deep i like it a lot. Keep writing