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April 18, 2010
By janette93 BRONZE, Bell Canyon, California
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tears here
tears their
tears shatter everywhere
its not raining
but everythings wet
cant predict the future
but my futures set
beneath a river
ill die
knowing i drowned myself in cries

© Shira B., Marblehead, MA

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poetry_addict said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:37 am
love it super deep plz check out sum of my stuff
WhiteBear SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 3:08 pm
WhiteBear SILVER, Beckenham, Kent, Other
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Darkness cannot drive out darkness, only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate, only love can do that.

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very good, lots of emotion and description. Good job! ;)
Brandon3607 GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 7:08 pm
Brandon3607 GOLD, Lemoore, California
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Wow THAT is GOOD :)

 

Paulina45 SILVER said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:44 pm
Paulina45 SILVER, El Paso, Texas
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This is a short poem, but it is so deep! Keep it up!!
janette93 BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2010 at 6:42 pm
janette93 BRONZE, Bell Canyon, California
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treat others the way you would want to be treated

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haha thanks :)
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 10 2010 at 10:59 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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very nice." I'll die here and it'll be all my fault so please dont feel sorry for me. oh look here come my tears,I guess I'll drown now." I love that.