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Would you still love me?

April 28, 2010
By Muziksoul29 PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
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Dont ever look to th epast, cause you see things you already know. Look to the future to see things come at you like a fast ball.<br /> -Me:)

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If everything was perfect
Would we be together
If I had never met you
Would we be together
if no matter how hard I tried
Nothing ever changed
Would you be standing beside me
If every time I heard your name I cried
Would you still love me?

© Lauren M., Scotch Plains, NJ

The author's comments:
a guy broke my heart, and I don't know what to do. He stares at me during lunch, but never talks to me. If you think you know hwat I should do, post a comment, please.
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Muziksoul29 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 8 2010 at 11:21 pm
Muziksoul29 PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
29 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont ever look to th epast, cause you see things you already know. Look to the future to see things come at you like a fast ball.<br /> -Me:)

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Thanks for the advice, and I would take it if I could, but he moved to California and I am in Illinois.
KiraKira PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 8 2010 at 5:28 pm
KiraKira PLATINUM, Cardiff By The Sea, California
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Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living, and above all, pity those who live without love -Albus Dumbledore

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Next time he stares at you, go up to him and ask why. He broke your heart. You need space to regroup, get an idea of where you are headed, talk to your friends. Don't worry. Love is all you need (The Beatles).