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Dear Bestfriend(?),

April 30, 2010
By callmebaddog SILVER, Spokane, Washington
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Dream as if you&#039;ll live forever. Live as if you&#039;ll die today. <br /> -James Dean

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Why can't you be around me, and your new friends at the same time?
How come your decisions are never the "good" ones?
When did you become so self-centered?
What did I do to you?
Who are you?
Let me know when you figure that out.

© Kelley C., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I was thinking about how many times a day I think about the bestfriend I used to have. How she acts now, and what I'd like to know about why. I'm sorry to others who feel like this it's just that what I happens, just happens.
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 11:03 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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interesting i liked to hear how this happened but it's not my business fortunanetly a great poem came out of it and i'm sorry to hear u lost a best friend that's always hard in ways i feel like this girl has changed my friends but no one likes her she's a snob why am  i tellin gu this ? :P
corallee DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 11:43 pm
corallee DIAMOND, Newport Coast, California
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I agree with the first line comment, but after that it's absolutely lovely. It's very relatable, and I really like how you kind of ram those questions at the reader just like how they'd fill up your head when you're frustrated with a "best friend". 
callmebaddog SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:02 pm
callmebaddog SILVER, Spokane, Washington
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I believe so as well! I just now noticed that too! Thank you for pointing that out :)!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
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This is very emotional with the length. Anyway, I think you have a problem with the flow on the first line. Other than that, I really like this. :)