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May 12, 2010
By anime18 SILVER, Brampton, Other
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anime18 SILVER, Brampton, Other
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Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake.

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THE CRISPNESS OF THE SUN
TOUCHES THE FROZEN SURFACE OF MY SKIN
CLASHINF DFFECTS OF FIRE AND ICE
TRANSFORM TO A WONDEROUS TWISTER
CAPTURED THROUGH THE SIEGE
EXPLORING THE ENDS
PERPLEXED IMAGERY AT EVERY ABSTRACT BISION
BREATHELESS FOR THE GRASP
OUT OF REACHING DISTANCE
LOCKED SECURELY
WHERE IT CAN BE KEPT HIDDEN
AND ULTIMATELY SACRED
FROM A WORLD SHATTERED IN A BROKEN GLASS

© Zoelle M., Boston, MA

The author's comments:
THIS PIECE HAS MORE TO DO WITH THE INSIDE OF MY IMAGINATION AND THE LANGUAGE HERE DESCRIBES AN ABSTRACT SURROUNDING WITH FIRE AND ICE WHILE FALLING IN THE MIDDLE TO FIND THE END.
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anime18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 7:06 am
anime18 SILVER, Brampton, Other
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THANKYOU  FOR YOU FEEDBACK 

I REALLY APPRECIATE IT I AM CURRENTLY WRITING A CHAPTER FOR MY SOON TO BE FIRST NOVEL WISH ME LUCK,

I'LL SEND A PIECE TO YOU WHEN I'M DONE MY FIRST CHAPTER

Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 6:18 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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wow!!! this is intense, descriptive and simply amazing!!! great job-this is truelly original!!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!! :)