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May 14, 2010
By tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
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tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
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smile through everything no matter how bad it gets because it could be worse and if it gets worse well then it can only get better. :)

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She is the butterfly gurl
Ready to fly
Waitng to soar

She is the peacemaker
Making peace for everyone else
Except herself

She is the listener
She’ll listen to whoever
Shows up at her door

She is the advisor
Advising those
less wiser

she feels all alone
like a no one
in the world

she’ll do whatever you need
within reason
cuz she jjust wants to please

she knows what is right
but she’d rather love
than fight

but she is also
the trouble maker
giving bad advice

she goes back on her word
after listening
cuz she aint no

*SuPeR GuRl*

© Elizabeth G., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
well i think this is kind of how alot of ppl feel. we all want someone to be there but sometimes even that person lets you down
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tori-gurl PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2013 at 5:54 pm
tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
32 articles 0 photos 85 comments

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smile through everything no matter how bad it gets because it could be worse and if it gets worse well then it can only get better. :)

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I think i shall attempt to write one:) thanks!  
TUBBZ-6 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 23 2010 at 9:43 pm
TUBBZ-6 PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
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&quot;To the well-organized mind, death is but the next great adventure.&quot; - Harry Potter (Daniel)

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hey tori-gurl just wondering are you going to have a poem called  super girl to go with this one i think it would be a great idea to have it

your poetry friend tubbz

TUBBZ-6 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 1:37 pm
TUBBZ-6 PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
22 articles 1 photo 14 comments

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&quot;To the well-organized mind, death is but the next great adventure.&quot; - Harry Potter (Daniel)

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i like it i really like it