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June 15, 2010
By VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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i can't fall anymore
i once did and i still do
over and over
as time looks at me
falling to the ground
afraid of love to vanish
holding on because afraid of being alone,as a selfish girl
you may label me
afraid of everything in my present
past and the future
in a long distance relationship
killing myself to stay stable
pulling myself togather
for him,jacob
i can't but tear once or twice or more,
it's the only escape of this
of my fears of lonesome n love
locked in my mind
missing all those moments
when i knew what i want
and what i need
i'm no longer sure
of what i want and what i need
all i know is that fear
is holding me back
from jacob and everyone
a selfish child
wanting to understand the world
not possible, because one human
can't solve their own problems
why can a person, understand the world
a misconception of me and the world

© Jaycee R., Lewisville, TX

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VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 10:44 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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awwww thanks:) i will read yourz...n see wat ya got:)
PrincessPineapple GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 5:46 am
PrincessPineapple GOLD, Chesapeake, Virginia
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&quot;To love someone is to learn the song that is in their heart, and sing it to them when they have forgotten.&quot; ~unknown

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i like this! it's deep, but at the same time you can relate to it, which makes for really great writing! check out some of my stuff too?
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 19 2010 at 1:01 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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thank you, i wanna say i appriciate ur comment
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 19 2010 at 1:01 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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thanks...it means alot to me as a poet writer.
xXsmileXx PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 9:03 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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&quot;Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching&quot; ~me ;)

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This poem really caught my eye. I know what you're going through and really you're such an amazing writer. truly i was drawn in deeper with every line. Awesome job!! I can't say it any way else
ShytoyaB SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 8:05 pm
ShytoyaB SILVER, Oxford, Alabama
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There&#039;s gonna be some stuff u gonna see that&#039;s gonna make it hard To smile in the future, but through whatever you see, Through all the rain and all the pain, you gotta keep your sense of humor. you gotta be able to smile through all this bull~&quot;~tupac

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this is a really great poem..i can soo relate to it
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:54 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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thank you, for the support n reading my writing misconception
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:53 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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thank you:)

i will check out yours, that i promise

ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:25 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

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That was soooo good ! Don't stop writing your so good :) Come check out my poems , thank youu :)
ShadesOfPale SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 1:52 pm
ShadesOfPale SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
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Don&#039;t go a day being with someone that you CAN live without.

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I'm glad :) I've been in your situation before, so I related to it very well...I know things seem very tough at times, but you WILL come out of it ok, you always do :)
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 9:44 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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thanks, i truly wrote this poem down to reveal my current feelings i didn't care fore my grammer...random thoughts. i had to write down but it means alot to me what you said:)
ShadesOfPale SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 9:11 am
ShadesOfPale SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
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Don&#039;t go a day being with someone that you CAN live without.

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Not the best grammar in the world, but poetry isn't really about grammar unless your in school or something. As for the context, I really liked the wording and the story within...I felt your pain; I felt your hope; I felt your clinging on to what you have; I felt your fear... It's very hard to get someone to feel that in a poem, and you did very well at it...Grteat job! I do not think I will forget you anytime soon.