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I let you in my heart

May 27, 2010
By BeautifulSkye PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
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you cant live with them... you cant live without them.

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I let you in my heart
and you made me think you loved me
I let you in my heart
and you lied to me
I let you in my heart
and you cheated
I let you in my heart
and you broke it to pieces
I let you in my heart
and it was a mistake
I let you in my heart
and I will never do it again

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

The author's comments:
This was inspired by one of my ex-boyfriends that i truly loved but decided to break my heart.



-C.S.D




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BeautifulSkye PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 4:48 pm
BeautifulSkye PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
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aww thank you i i really havent got too many compliments on my poems until i got on here
TravelerInWaiting SILVER said...
on Jul. 9 2010 at 7:38 pm
TravelerInWaiting SILVER, Glen Ridge, New Jersey
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I really like your poem. The language and phrases you used in it were straight forward which is refreshing. I can totally relate to what your wrote about.