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beautiful storm

May 27, 2010
By jake.theawesome BRONZE, Keller, Texas
jake.theawesome BRONZE, Keller, Texas
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as the gray skys roll in
the wind begins to blow
a slow, steady wind
that signals something is about to happen
a low rumble
a bright flash
a normal spring night
nothing new
nothing different
just a beautiful storm


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on Jul. 1 2010 at 10:39 pm
RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."

This is great! I can really picture it!

on Jun. 29 2010 at 3:27 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

It's beautiful:) good job can you please comment on my work any advice is welcome:)